First Chapters / Mini Edit
​The beginning of a novel is make or break and a reader's first impression. It's one of the most difficult parts to get right and to engage your intended audience.
Perhaps you want to check your manuscript opens in a way that's strong enough to stand out in a sea of competition. This mini edit helps you to gain valuable feedback with guidance you can often carry throughout the rest of your novel.
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It's also suitable for authors with partial manuscripts. Maybe you've hit a wall or come to a crossroads during the writing process. In this circumstance, we'll look at next steps and what you're envisioning for your book to help unlock the rest. Alternatively, you may simply need a fresh pair of eyes to review what you have so far.
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What's Included
What You'll Receive
An in-depth editorial report of your early chapters.
Specific notes throughout your manuscript.
A breakdown of word counts and chapter scene summaries up to the first
15 000 words to help with revising and to provide a bird's-eye view.
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An analysis of your book's synopsis if available, to compare how the rest of your planned or written story ties in with the opening.
A final email consultation to discuss anything related to your feedback.
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Investment
The rate is a flat fee of $300.00
Timescale
Allow 2 - 3 weeks turnaround time.
How It Works
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I focus on much of the same big picture elements as a Developmental Edit but with an emphasis on the strength of your hook, how you've approached the setup phase, the introduction of your characters (or their re-emergence if it's a series), how you've structured your first chapters and the execution of the emerging story goal and subplots.
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This service is performed on the first 15 000 words of your manuscript only.
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